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My Besties

~~~~James~~~~

This person is one of my besties
That have moved so far away
Up at Port Macquarie
Where he might stay
He is one of the first besties I met
When I saw him move away
My heart tore into pieces


~~~~Monique~~~~

So funny,
So caring
I can't believe she moved to Sydney
I still get to see her every 11-12 weeks
But still, I hated seeing her move


~~~~Bree and Dannielle~~~~

Very funny
Sometimes bossy
Very caring {when they want to be}
Moved to Queensland
I don't know when they're coming back
A pair of very cool sisters

~~~~Hope~~~~

Hope is a friend that I only met this year
We are really great friends
She is very and too caring and she is also loving
She left on the 7th week of first term
It is now the end of third term in 2 days
YAY!!!



~~~~Kirralee~~~~

Bestest friend of all!
Met her first
She lives in the next town from me
But I never get to see her
It feels like she has left me




Author notes

I can't write about one friend Because all of them have moved so far away.
These people all broke my heart when they left.
These are the only people who have left.

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  • Slick99
    October 6, 2008

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    B-F-F's

    aww, i'm sorry your friends moved away. i've had some friends that have moved away, and it's like not fair. good luck in the contest!!! -slick


  • kel dog
    September 24, 2008

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    so sad that your friends moved away. its so hard losing a friend. i should know. Your poem was great.


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Oh, so sad. You still miss your friends, and you tell us why. I share your sadness here, Georgia - you have written a poem that makes me feel as you do. Very good.

    Losing things seems so much a part of life that it happens to everyone, all the time - but that doesn't mean it doesn't hurt.


  • The Demon Lord
    September 24, 2008
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    wow 10/10

    well done georgia!


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    I think this is a beautiful poem my sweet girl. I know how much you miss your friends and do you know what? I miss them too. I hope that one day soon we can go and visit some of them.

    Love you heaps sweetheart

    Love and big big hugs, Mummy


  • arafura gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    This is a great poem. You miss your friends badly I can see. Cheer up! Good luck in the contest.


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    This poem is adorable!
    I'm so sorry that your friends had to move
    Good luck and thanks for the entry

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