petals are the beauty of the flower,
they are so soft,
so sweat,
so colourful,
without them,
the flower is not beautiful,
without them,
the flower is nothing,
without them,
the flower is dead.
petals are so woderful,
people use them to find love,
he loves me,
he loves me not,
he loves me..........
A contest entry
- Pick Words Like Flowers Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
475 points, ended September 27, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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jasmine how can you write so good lol
You take very much after your sister
Awesome poem its really cute
XxX
Hannie
(dani's friend if u dont remember me lol)
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When we take away what is beautiful about life, what is we are left with death. What a beautiful point you make. Wonderful insight. Beautifully written, sweetie.
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ahh the petals of a flower can hold much wonder in the eyes of an admirer. well expressed here for your tender age, welcome to AP and keep writing. lovely job.
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Very well done for your first poem. Good job sis!
Keep writing.
Yay!
Dani.
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Ty for entering, jazzie
Lynda
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Very good write
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This is so good at 11 years old wow! Keep it up I enjoyed this read
Welcome to AP 
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Very good write
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I tell you, I wish I had your talent when I was 11 years old
This is beautifully sad and well pennned; a lovely write to read
Best of luck in the contest
♥
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Stay safe
~Manda
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hey,
This is my first poem
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