Look at this
its beautiful
isn't it.
I mean
have you ever seen
anything so colorful.
Something that smells
so wonderful.
Something that looks
so perfect
in my delicate
hands.
It's the most beautiful
thing in all the world.
And it's even more beautiful
because you gave it to me.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick Words Like Flowers Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
475 points, ended September 27, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the simplicatiy of this piece...yet it still has this touching effect. It's funny how a little thing can make someones day.
Nice job
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Touching piece...
Lovely...Ty for entering
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