to bring to you something pure:
elegant and absolute
intact in intent
fair and flawless
primal
polished
unblemished
something as beautiful
and as timeless as your name:
bernadette
this is my desire --
to make you truly happy
please accept
my friendship
Author notes
For you, Cupcrazy
In a list
A contest entry
- FITTED COVE—A Friendship Themed Contest to honor Bunny, Cupcrazy by ten thousand cicadas.
3000 points, ended October 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I was so stricken by the juxtaposition of "primal" with "polished" and "unblemished." I think it perfectly describes the beauty of true friendship that is both instinctive and yet, practiced. This is such a lovely gift; pure indeed. Thank you.
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Humm..how liucky is the friend of yours which inspire you to write from the heart such a hearfelt and beautiful poem..well done my friend...
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I wonder if she knows how truly blessed she is by such an offer! I love this.
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excellent / but...
shhhh./ lol
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Your words are simple, eloquent, "fair and flawless"; you have such beautiful vision.
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Lovely Poem
Myra, You have penned such beautiful words of friendship. Stunning imagery that warms the senses. Friendship is so important and should be cherished and nutured. This was a pleasure to read.
Bless You,
Sandy
:s :s
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