watching you dance to the music has me hypnotised as your body moves with the beat. Taking in the sensual moves of your hips as they sway from side to side. I walk to you and gently put my hands on your hips swinging to the rhythm while my fingers feel the softness of your skin. I wrap my arms around your waist, my body pressing against yours taking in the smell of sweet perfume on your neck. I reach down the front of your skirt running my fingers over your shaved pussy until your bud gets hard and stiff wanting more attention. I lightly apply pressure on your clit moving my finger quickly from side to side as you move with me while you dance. I hear you moan in my ear while my own pussy starts to throb just by touching your wet slit between your legs. Inserting a finger inside you and working my thumb on your flower bud I trace my hand along your stomach up to your full breasts. Your hard nipples teasing my finger tips when my hand tenderly runs across them. You start to gracefully flow with the music faster as my thumb moves on your clit while I fuck you with my finger in the middle of the dance floor. You reach back grabbing my thighs with a tight grip as I felt your pussy start to quiver feeling your warm cum on my hand. I took out my hand and licked the juices off smiling at you as my eyes told you how good you tasted. I turned around to walk off the dance floor thinking I didn't know your name but I loved the.............
Hedonistic Dance
Author notes
The picture with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture found on google images
A contest entry
- ERG........Whatever You Effin Want by fairytalelovestory.
400 points, ended October 6, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Unbelievable!
what better way to introduce yourself
than on a dance floor in the heat of passion.
I loved the exotic feel along with the
mystery and provocative nature of an
Hedonistic Dance. You write how I feel
and sometimes act. Nicely done. Bravo
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different and very creative comming from you it has a chanting hideous voodoo tune to it to me as the reader that makes this creepy sexy i liked it baby
good luck in the contest
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Very beautiful, I do not know what to say.
Lovely picture, nice flow. Making love with words sometimes is the best.
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Whew!
Oh my now this is one hot dance. You sure gave this one such a powerful description.
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Wow, this is great sweetie!
What a lovely setting and thought
that you have penned here. Sometimes
an anonymous and passionate meeting
such as this one can change everything.
I love the imagery and the way that you
flowed in this. Great title that you
picked here as well! Well done dear
and keep it up. Thanks a lot for sending
this one my way!
Jeremy0826
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Oh my hotchocolate this is very tantalizing indeed
and the title is perfection
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Damn girl
This was hot in the style I am getting acustom to reading from you. You rock my world, Boog
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mmmmmm....... nice visuals..... very HOT... fantastic picture too....
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nice ... 'bout time somebody showed the poets here how to write something that is really sexy insteadof just dull and graphic porno which is actually almost too boring to read ... one line of this is worth a whole book of the little boy crud I see too much of here
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mmmmmmmmmmmmm
hot hot hot.. I like that..
Well done.. and HOT...
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This was very good and I enjoyed it very much. You have talent an a very go imagination. Keep writing.
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i am wordless to write a comment
great job
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Wow!
I feel like dancing and feel like 'grabbing' your 'thighs with a tight grip' as you feel my pleasure zone start to quiver'. Thank you, honey, for your finger work. Let me lick and kiss them!
Great!
I only wish someone could treat me in such an erotic way!
Galaxy2
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girl you are the shit loving this wow
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D.A.M.N.
Girl, u really outdid yourself!!! Sexy is definitely your middle name!!! Great job sis!!
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Erotic Ecstasy
each word leads to a quivering heat your lines
create images of vivid passion well done!
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Thank you again...!
for more inspiration...!
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Many times before have I tasted love, yet never known her name.
This kind of love is both risky but the best!
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A brief encounter of the....
erotic kind.....
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WHEW!!
Ucan get worn out after dancing like that! l.o.l. uhmm.. yeah..
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