Not one, but another
Churning the anals of your brain
waves sending streams throughout
As they battle as individuals for supremacy
But you realize it's nothing but an...
Incomplete emotion
Author notes
This describes that type of feeling you have...when you feel happy, sad, angry, jealous, hurt, drunk, confused, frustrated and ignorant all at once...you never know exactly how you feel...and in the end you will always feel that incompleteness...because all of them combined...just create one large...incomplete emotion.
Something's always missing...sometimes it is the reason...sometimes it is understanding...
A contest entry
- Quickie: 30 words only by Rizzie.
370 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lots of feeling in it, thanks for the entry
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lol im sure you meant canals as opposed to anals mind in the gutter? ahaha kidding kidding. now lets see...this one is very abstract...i like the 2nd and 3rd line, the imagery the water creates...and it's very true what you say in your AN....you never know exactly how you feel. god knows ive felt like that a million times great job!!
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great poem... so true... keep up the great writing and cant wait tot read more
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