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Natural beauty taking hold
of hearts lost in translation.
Images of harden stone,
left to, imagination.
Brightness brings the dawn of light.
The endless ceasing day.
Wash me clean of mercy,
leave the horror in my wake.
Imagine dreams alone again,
cold unfeeling night.

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40-60 words only!!!!

A contest entry

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  • jcat gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Love the deep metaphor that is used here!!! You invite the reader in and an than make them think hard on the deeper meaning here!!! I love that!!! Wonderful entry and thank you for entering!!


  • The FaeQueen
    September 24, 2008
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    You never disappoint me! and you did it again! good luck on the contest