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Tenderness / acrostic

Tenderly tracing tears tracks
Enveloping every essence
Nervously nestling nearness 
Delicately directing dialog
Every endeavor expected
Responding rapture returned
Nirvana
Expressing emotion earnestly
Suppressing sensual surprised
Satisfaction satiated



Author notes

an acrostic of sorts

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    Wow, this is such an awesome acrostic!
    What a beautiful thought and all the
    best to you in this contest! Thanks
    a lot for sharing this one here!




    Jeremy0826


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    wow, Great Acrostic with excellent allitteration...
    Beautifully done
    Ty for entering

    Lynda


  • Blueskywonder
    September 24, 2008

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    A deep and passionate acrostic expressing a intimicy... understanding of Lovers.
    Great write!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    I like this!! You did real good on the acrostic