The tingling in my nostril generates twitching convulsions,
off-setting red-rimmed itchy eyes.
Tears stream in duel rivers
racing the snot casscading to my lips.
The scratching pandomonia migrates
from my face to my knees
leaving behind attractive red blotches.
Down to my last reserve of tolerance
I wrinkle my nose now bidding my leave.
Swiping at loose fur
pasted to my skin and clothes
the kitten sneezes
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This made me grin.
Ithy eyes, huh? You'll have to explain that one to me.
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the batteries in my wireless keyboard were going dead
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You are so full of excuses. You should write a book and make millions. Or do you have an excuse for that too?
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If you give me some time I could probably think of one or four
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