Candles burning brightly
soft scent fills the air
Wine glasses on the table
two empty chairs sit there
Music playing softly
as we dance across the stage
All eyes are upon us
yet I can't see past your handsome face
I gaze into your alluring eyes
your embrace ever strong
You hold me close & ever tight
til the final song
The room is almost empty now
through one last pirouette
Through brilliant candlelight
upon the wall
our magnificent silhouette
A contest entry
- Pick Words Like Flowers Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
475 points, ended September 27, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful and expresses with indelible images, and romantic terms those moments that make a relationship special. As you show, a dance can be more than just a dance.
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wow, this was amazing, I mean the imagesd that were placed in my head....wow!! Especially the last lines...and super good rhyming and rythem. My best wishes to you in the contest auntie. Love ya ♥you niece.
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Beautiful and romantic...
Lovely rhyming couplets
Ty for entering!
Lynda
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