Sun kisses the sea
tickling waves illuminate swirls
droplets splash in glistening curls
setting motions free
Dawn kisses the sky
clouds roll dancing all the way
floating happily they play
gently passing by
Tree kisses the ground
embrace that roots a contract sewn
sharing all, both have grown
emotions without sound
God kisses the Earth
brilliant colors mark creation
creatures thriving in elation
of a miracle birth
Author notes
Word prompt *kisses
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is lovely!
I adore every stanza and how the kiss follows every part of nature from sky to Earth....
Just so beautiful!
Ty for entering!
Lynda
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Beautiful. There's such a wonderfully peaceful feel to this poem, as though nothing could ever possibly be wrong in the world...harkens back to childhood and innocence....Thank you for sharing this!
Luck. -
Don't do yourself an injustice, this beautiful piece with flawless rhyme and deeply engaging imagery and emotion is certainly among the top contenders here. very well done.
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Awesome poem darkie. I love the last stanza.
"brilliant colors mark creation
creatures thriving in elation" = awesome!
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