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Wandering through the beauty of your eyes,

I see cotton candy clouds and skies of blue.

Hoping not to wake you I tred softly,

discovering so many wonderful things about you.

 

I see how you treat people in your life,

even though they don't give you the time of day.

You always take the initiative to make people smile,

touching their hearts in every possible way.

 

When tears fall from a stranger's eyes,

you kneel down to comfort and hold them.

You sing an enchanting tune in their ear,

and always find a way to help console them.

 

You whisper words of encouragement,

that helps to motivate and inspire each heart.

You show the world a better way to live,

and help them make a brand new start.

 

You truly are someone special in my eyes,

and to everyone that you meet everyday.

I am so proud to call you my best friend,

I'd have you no other way.

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Whisper

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. It looks like this was written from a prompt, but I wonder if you didn't have someone in mind when you wrote this. Absolutely beautiful.
    Best of luck in the contest!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    awwwww, came back to see the revision...beautiful

  • poet2angels gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    What a beautiful way to express "whisper" and do it to honor a best friend! How lovely!
    ty for entering!


    Lynda


  • Maedes
    September 24, 2008

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    Mother Teresa

    You whisper words of encouragement,
    that helps to motivate and inspire each heart.
    You show the world a better way to live,
    and help them make a brand new start...
    how lucky you have such a friend; remind me with Mother Teresa


  • moon2u
    September 24, 2008
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    This is lovely you are describing a truly compassionate person. good luck in the contest

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