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Nature at it's best

Don't you think it's magical
The way the wind wispers in the trees

Don't you think it's beautiful
How the peacocks feathers shine

Don't you think it's incredible
How trees start as a tiny seed and grow to be so big

Don't you think it's enchanting
How flowers bloom in spring

I think it is
Magical
Beautiful
Incredible
Enchanting

When nature is at it's best
The hot sun in summer
The cold snow in winter
The twitter of birds in spring
The blowing trees in Autumn

In summer, winter, spring and autumn
Nature has it's ways
Of making everything beatuiful
In every little way

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  • offlimits
    October 5, 2008
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    this is beautiful well done on a beautiful write good luck


  • SchizoChic
    October 1, 2008

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    Beautiful! Bravo! What a fabulous picture you've painted here for us with this piece. One little mistake tho, whisper is spelled wrong. But other than that it's lovely. Best of luck to you in life and in this contest.


  • Olivias Violin
    September 24, 2008
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    Nice!

    Do you often write about nature?


  • November-Dani
    September 23, 2008

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    Awww this is so nice, i find it hard to write nature poems. You should enter these in contests. Well done!
    Dani.