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Never Ending

Titillating apprehension
suffocates my entire being
when I think of you

Obscure reasoning
blocks my unclear mind
when I dream of you

Shattered dreams
beckon
Hollow screams
but
Never Ending...


 

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  • Rizzie
    September 24, 2008
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    very beautiful poem thanks for entering


  • everyone1 gold member
    September 23, 2008
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    Fascinating!

    Captivation to the last! I enjoyed it most prominently. Best wishes in the comp.

    ~ James ~