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Revelation

Pestilence over takes the land
Forcing the farmers to harvest blood stained sand
Crops dying and locusts flying
Tormented humans crying

Buildings falling from the quake
Fissures forming from the shake
Land lapsing upon itself
As waves diminish the continental shelf

War killing men abound
As bombs fall all around
Children crying in the street
For their mothers are dying at their feet




Infernos destroy the rest
As God reveals his final test
Angels flying in the sky
Harvesting those that do not die

End of every sin
A new life can begin
Heaven granting rebirth
And out of the ashes a new Earth is born

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  • brooklynngirl
    September 29, 2008

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    nice job...
    i really think the ending was a little cliche. but your exicution was great. 4 and a half stars.