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My Heart

Alluring beauty beckons me
To captivate my heart of stone
Break down the walls
That separate us
From each other

From the decades between us
That hold us in time
Ever spindling down
To enchant us nonetheless
But hold us together

Mindless chatter fills my head
Of incessant nights alone
Without the touch of
The skin of beauty
That befalls my lustful heart

Heart of stone turned to glass
Shattered by love's first light
Holding dear to you and me
But knowing nothing more
Than evolution of life



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altnude.blogspot.com, from an artist called Maria Flores.

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  • MessedupMarionette
    October 10, 2008

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    I like the route you took with this. The language wasn't particularly flowery, but the ideas drew the reader in. Thanks for entering.