A husband is successful
If his wife feels as safe
and cared for as she did
from her Father
A wife is successful
If her husband feels as
Loved as he did from
his mother
A contest entry
- Slogans by 2lullabyhaven.
450 points, ended September 27, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a very nice slogan. A bit hard on the singles - have they no way to be succesful?
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A single is successful if you can look in the mirror, smile, and mean it.
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You are so wise.
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I think you are spot on with this one...so true!
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Wow, a great slogan-thanks for your entry lol
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