lieng down next to you,
wiating for my dream come true
promised to stay with you
through the pain and suffering so crude
you said you hated me when i loved you
crushing me and my feelings to the ground
to somewhere they were always bound
then someone new was afound
keeping me alive to the pound
being my candle for the dark
but even candels soon wear out
and when you'r left with the dark
you parish within its whole
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great peom. loved it

