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Love

Sweet nectar of passion
intoxicating the mind so sweetly,
traveling through a world wind
of transcending thoughts
and emotions of such intensity.
Passionate lovers
locked in a tender embrace,
bodies entwined as one
under an innocent moon.
Yearing
for these simple emotional pleasures
to never end,
riding upon the crest
of the eternal tides of the heart.
Flowing within its current,
time strengthening all,
testing sincerity to its limits.
Never knowing
where it all shall end up,
and not truly caring.
For
all that matters
is that which
fills the heart,
making it beat even stronger.

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  • esroddo silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    Wow you have a way with words

    I can feel the passion and love that melts from your lips. Like sweet honey flowing slowly, and sweetening every pore. Thanks for this wonderful write. LISA


  • lisdovi
    September 24, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem

    So sensual, soft and warm, Your words just flowed in the the heart of the reader. I wish you good luck in the contest I think you got her Heart. *smile*
    LIZ