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Time's Up

The last drop from the empty IV.
Drip, drip, drip, drip,
Or is it
Tick, tock, tick, tock?

The minute hand strikes midnight,
Time's up.
                        Beeeep...

I'm moving on..

Author notes

Haha, I have no clue what my inspiration was for this.
But I kinda like it.
Short and simple

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  • Rizzie
    September 24, 2008
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    Very interesting good work on this poem thanks for entering


  • everyone1 gold member
    September 23, 2008
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    OOOOOOOOOOH!

    How amonously delicious! Great write. God bless you in this endeavore.

    ~ James ~