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Heaven, or Hell?

I came upon two doors today
One to heaven, one to hell
I saw a demon through one door
Through the other, I'm not so sure
It had the looks of a human,
But it was not,
It was of this world, and the next
The two worlds combined, i said
Could not have made a stranger creature
I looked like an angel,
But could not have been.
For if it was,
It was Hell's Angel.
It beckoned to me, i walked to it
As the last mistake i would make came to be
I stepped through the doorway,
As the floor fell away.
I screamed, without sound.
And it laughed, as I drowned.
The last words I thought were,
I've chosen my fate,
I have no remorse,
The only thing I would change,
Would be to go through the Gates Of Hell.

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Not really sure where this came from. I just started typing, and this is what happened.

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  • Flowergirl
    September 28, 2008
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    very nice write hopefully it is heaven and not hell great work keep it up....


    • lost-in-darkness12
      October 15, 2008
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      Thanx, but sometimes i think it mite be worse to go to heaven, but i havent really figured out wat i was meaning wen i wrote this one yet.