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Trapped

Trapped with no where
to go
Focused on these pearls
my heart beats slow

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credit to artistEARLS by =manips-of-artist2

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Wow, short yet speaks volumes. Very nice take on the picture. I do like your BG as well, sweet! Thanks for entering and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    Short and sweet.. though sad! A very nice take!


  • nature
    September 24, 2008

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    In a wink.

    My heart would have done the opposite;
    Beats would increase to see the pearls.
    In my hands I would jump all the traps
    But they are your tears beat the raps.

  • StroonsGreen
    September 23, 2008
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    short and sweet <3
    thanks for your comment love