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you may never know

i don't understand.
my head;
my heart
doesn't work that way.

don't help me up
if it's only
to watch
me fall again.

i don't need
help like that.

i would much rather
sit here
alone

i don't NEED
anyone.
i only
wanted
to love you

i am worth it.

you may never know that

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  • Congruence
    September 26, 2008

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    I liked the capitals on the word need - you are very good at those touches, it makes the poem very human and not some lofty piece of writing, in other words it connects.

    I also like the way you completely bare your soul in your writing, almost painfully, for me it is what makes your writing so special.

    I like this piece - not only is it personal it does speak to people, in the sense, we have all been in situations like this.

    Hugs and stuff

    James
    xxx