I’ve concealed myself with plastic wrap;
eyes deprived of strings
& lips failing to communicate
with clerical errors
that subsided from your...[“intentions”]
only to find myself irreparable
& you irreplaceable.
♥
Author notes
Photo Credit: dont speak by ~PiZZaDreaMs
Exactly 30 words 
A contest entry
- Quickie: 30 words only by Rizzie.
370 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
feedback would be greatly appreciated :D
Comments
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your short poems are amazing!!!!
like woaaah.
so first of all the picture and the title mesh so well together i LOVED it
only to find myself irreparable
& you irreplaceable.
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i like how you used irreparable and irreplaceable.. it made the poem so unique.
this was so emotional and filled with imagery.
good job on silver
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thankkks doll
woooot
comment spreeee !
haha
loveyouu♥
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your words convey a lot of emotion
and have a lot of depth to them
this was wonderful
congrats on the shiny
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Oooh, I loved the picture hoe You did a marvelous job of portraying such vivid emotion and imagery in only 30 words. Congrats on winning the silver trophy yo! You definitely deserved it
A brilliant piece!
HELL YEAH THIS IS MY BEST FRIEND IN DA WORLD ! hahaha<3333
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wow this was brilliant, awesome, I loved it congrats on the silver, it was well deserved!
~Michaela~
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a brilliant and beautiful poem. i won't change anything about it.
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very wonderful write thanks for the entry
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this is so gorgeous ♥♥♥
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This is great. A wonderful poem with only 30 words. Good luck in the comp
~lae
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Thanks dear
Means a lot ♥
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Intence!
I just loved it! Blessing in the compition. You should do very well with this one.
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Thank you I appreciate the feedback
♥
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I feel this so deeply right now.
I think I just might make him read this. -
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Wootwoot !
I'm glad you can relate. Well, not glad but it's nice to know I'm not the only one. Thank youuuu<333
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