Horn blowing,
black,
yellow roofed,
four abreast,
they jostle
for any one of three
available lanes.
Oblivious of cyclists,
red double-decker buses,
pedestrians,
sacred cows
and other legal road users.
A contest entry
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Comments
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fine write, enjoyable
this poem speaks out, well done, thanks -
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tony yates
Thankyou for your very complimentary comments. I see from your profile that you're from the U K; from whence do you hail?
I was English born, but later, by migration, became an Aussie.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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