Three girls hide inside of me.
You'll see only one,
the one you want to see
Virginal innocent,
Sexual deviant,
Moody and inconstant
The gentle lamb with lions teeth
baits with a goddesses form
The lion with it's gentle paws
will sing sweet lullabies
They lure you in
They hunt you down
and in the dark
they feed
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by MessedupMarionette.
700 points, ended October 10, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved this. So dark and vivid. I felt truly drawn into this world that you create with your words. Wow.
I'm sad though, that you didn't read the rules. And by my word, I must disqualify you. Sadness.. would've been one of my top picks. Cheers, Scion -
Hmmm... this is really strange. I'm not really sure what to make of it. I like it, though. The first half was kind of expected, but you took it to a different, more creative level. Thanks for entering.
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yes!
this is my favorite I think there is those three in all women... -
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I agree, in some form or another, although the evil may be less dominant in other people
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