Did you hear me scream silently in the night,
Or where you just curious?
A vulture come to check if I had died yet.
Sorry to disappoint,
But sadly,
Oh so sadly,
I remain here in this existence.
No matter how many purple tunnels I slice,
No matter how many words I scream,
No matter how many lives I change,
I will be free.
Caught red wristed.
Is this not what you expected?
Talking is not quite the same as reality,
Is it?
IS IT?
How about we sit down and talk,
Vile corruption might as well be spread in comfort.
Legs gone soft?
All the blood rushing to your head?
Here,
Have mine.
No,
Its fine,
Seriously,
Take it,
I never wanted it anyway.
What does it do?
Can you sell it?
Can you eat it?
Can you drink it?
Well yes…
I suppose…
Mmm, crimson smile.
Show me your heart,
And I will bite it.
Oh dear,
Look who got infected.
Bored of the shakes?
Shame.
Tough even.
Stuck in my head.
Pressure breaks the skin,
But no matter how I squeeze,
Your words never effect me.
Why cant I live in nightmares,
And escape from your world.
So many rules,
So little time.
Why,
Cant,
I,
Do,
It?
Here’s the room,
Here’ the tool,
You have half an hour of freedom,
And we have a mop.
Understand?
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So many thoughts, so little space.
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Pain, depression, utter dispair, that sick hollow feeing of falling so long down the black pit that you no longer really care what you'll find at the bottom anymore just as long as you are able to finally stop falling. It's all right here, and it's not apoligizing for the disturbing morbitity that is it's nature. Beautifully (and quite appropriately) laced with bitter sarcasm and cynicism.
Caught red wristed.
Is this not what you expected?
Talking is not quite the same as reality,
Is it?
IS IT?
How about we sit down and talk,
Vile corruption might as well be spread in comfort.
perfectly stated and impossible to ignore.
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hmm sad
this is a heart felt write and your words are awesome. emotional. keep penning 
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I love it! i love the imagery . Kinda sad-ish mood. your a great poet. awsome!
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Excellent. I loved every word of this. Great write hun
~love lae
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Here’s the room,
Here’ the tool,
You have half an hour of freedom,
And we have a mop.
Understand?
I loved the ending. The tine was consistent throughout which I liked. Great write
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Thank you for taking the time to read this As you can see I was in a bit of a mood when I wrote this
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