Come on—go on, confess your sins.
Tell me everything you've done wrong.
Remember- the person you betrayed
is the last to forgive that they were played.
Should've kept your skeletons in the grave,
or in the closet, where they belong.
Now don't complain when I'm with the maid
in our bedroom, doing nude CPR.
Author notes
09.23.08
Vaughn.
Prompt:
5. Bedrooms are not for you and the maid to practice nude CPR
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended September 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Well this is quite an interesting poem that you have written here. something I'm not really used to come across these pages, but that's good
Thank you for entering the contest!
Leander -
Great take on your prompt. Clever and entertaining write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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an interesting take on the promt good luck in the contest
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