these are things my kitty-cat does,
to tell me that she loves me.
she curls up in my lap,
and takes a nap,
and rolls on her back while i pet her.
she sleeps on my chest,
because it's the best,
but mostly because i let her.
these are things my kitty-cat does,
to tell me that she loves me.
these are things my kitty-cat does,
to tell me that she loves me.
she nuzzles my chin,
which gives me a grin,
and tickles my nose with her tail.
she snuggles and purrs
to tell me I'm hers
and she helps me read my mail.
these are things my kitty-cat does,
to tell me that she loves me.
these are things my kitty-cat does
to tell me that she loves me
she brings me the mouse
that she found in the house
although it only made of cloth
she meows and sings
and plays with my strings
and keeps my closet free of moths
these are things my kitty-cat does
to tell me that she loves me.
Author notes
Written January 22nd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- One Hour Contest - Prewrite Heaven! Enter Now! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended June 17, 2005, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Once upon a time, there was a cat...." by Glasyalabolas.
700 points, ended October 9, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 15 of 15
-
This piece also works really well as a piece that you can tell a small child, very loving and well worded.
Good write.
-
This is Great
I love it! So light hearted and full of fantastic imgery as well. What a tremendous job you've done on this. Really put a smile upon my face and is very well written. Bravo! Gypsy
-
Newfound Cat person
these are things my kitty-cat does,
to tell me that she loves me.
she nuzzles my chin,
which gives me a grin,
My favorite section. I don't have a cat, I'm not a cat fanatic, and yet I love this piece. Simple, pure, sweet, touching, geez. You've got it all. -
YAY!
Wow, one of the best childrens pieces I have read on here. Awesome poem. I love cats so much. Good stuff, and it braught a smile to my face after a really crappy day. Thanks so much. You get another applause! -
hey this is really really cute. i love kitties! the ONLY thing that i didnt like was was the last two lines of each stanza... i understand you had an effect you were going for but it didnt seem to flow to me. but regardless, good job.
-
this is cute. i have a kitten and he is the sweetest. although he is more like a dog. he chases his tail and plays in the bathtub! its adorable
this is very sweet... nice visualizations of your little kitty-cat
-
awww this is sooo cute
-
I love cats... now I can visulise what your cat gets upto to make you feel that you're loved... I enjoyed it... thanx for sharing...
mina -
aaaawwww this poem is so cute (even if im not a huge fan of cats...) it makes me want to go get a kitten and hug and squeeze it and let it sleep on MY chest in by bed! adorable write..... hopefully you did well in the contest!!!!!!
-
THis is a delightful read. So upbeat and fresh.
Wonderful write.
;f Sam -
Very nice. Very simple and yet very heart warming. I enjoyed this as I have three cats of my own. Good write, brought a smile. Have fun. Steve
-
8/10
a very nice piece well done -
Perfect and cute and cuddly. Sounds like my new kitten. Tho she wants kisses from me. So I have to kiss her to get her to stop shoving her nose in my face. Cats are so cool. I sure missed having one for so long. This was wonderful and made me smile. Hugs and bites, Lady Raven
-
awwwww how cuteeee i love kitties i have a beautifullll kitty her names fluffy..but she's not at my house ...she's in the office where i work and so i see her then so she cant fall asleep on my chest and such but aww she loves me and rubs my legs and follows me everywhere so cute i love kittys i wish i could write somethin like that i like the rhymes you have how it kinda bounces around but its in order and sequence and such good job
-
This is just too cute, I too love cats and animals in general though I find it very difficult to write about them, you seem to have it well underhand, for the both of us I suppose! well done and nice write
Adding your comment:
1 - 15 of 15
