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Be my Masterpiece

Lets paint a picture
A sorrowful portrait
A life ended early
Had not a use for it
Lets write a novel
A mournful confession
I'll be the author
of your transgression

Be my masterpiece
Death is an Art and this knife is my brush
Be my Masterpiece
Skin like paper will bend and will crush
Be my Masterpiece
A paranormal story that will never fade
Be my Masterpiece
And we'll be equal for sins never repaid

Author notes

I miss talking about the world ending

A contest entry

new song

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  • KateMadness
    September 24, 2008

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    Wow

    You know, I had a poem a little while back that was quite similar to this.

    I absolutely loved that poem too. I see yours is a song, so hooray.

    I like it. And you did a very great job on it. Best of luck to you!