Solemn words are spoken
While tears of crimson flow,
The wind outside grows colder
Where did my angel go?
Alone I sit in solace
With gratitude and still
I can not help but wonder
Why my angel did disappear
Long ago he found me
In my darkness that unveiled
And saved me from my equality
Of eternal Hell
His mortal heart once shown me
A new and brighter way
To live my life to its fullest
And not let my time just slip away
My best friend, my angel
Where has our time gone?
Has it spread its wings like you
And soared away to things unknown?
My angel, my angel
Will you soon return to me?
For I am lost without you
My life seems incomplete
I remember fondly though
Those memories kept so well
And sometimes in my dreams
I see your face; the face of my angel
Days pass by so lucidly
When this madness and chaos
Come to wake and pass
Yet in my mind so beautifully
I remember your smile;
Your joyous laugh
Four times you saved me
From an oh so rueful fate
And I can not help but wonder my angle
These debts; how can I repay
My best friend, my angel
Please come back to me
For all seems lost without you
I am slowly losing who you taught me to be
My angel, my angel
How I miss you so
Just how much you mean to me
I think not
That you shall ever know
My best friend, my angel
I love you....
Author notes
I chose option one , although it also fits in with option two as well.
"And she will be loved"
A contest entry
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Comments
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brillaint! i feel the emotion behind it and your words are truely used to perfection. there is suspense somehow and a beautiful climax that is somehow crude but so simple and sweet as well. good work! <3
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kudos!
this is absolutely beautiful! i love it so very much, and the flow was very nice, and the rhyme didn't seem forced at all. the wording was just absolutely fantastic, and i loved the emotion put into this. i love the fact that it really could fit into either option -that's totally cool. you did a superb job. thanks so much for entering! good luck!
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