Hitherto I have n't observed
the jingling sounds of flowing waters
happening , very nearer to my residence
though decades passed by in passage of time
Have I not taken care of my environment
more than my comforts till now?
What is the impression now that catch
the eyes of all eager onlookers?
Till now my superficial status
made me blind and dumb
after all the days hard work
gone completed to by this time,
and also to the utmost satisfaction of higher ups
I am now slowly coming on to rest on the ground
to feel and experience the realities with needed vision
A sea of compassion is set now in my soul
A river of energy is flowing closely to my heart
A lake has undertaken the task of refurbishing me mentally
all things to put me to stand alert even during the ensuing fall time
Who am I in these changed scenario?
can't you presume or imaginine for your self
I am a wave weaving for the final part of my life
with all ups and downs likely to disturb me
from the streaming delight and joy ultimately
Author notes
the river of life...
A contest entry
- the river of life... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I agree with the report of the life given through the wonderful and sentimental journey of the immages here..well done...

