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Ultimately---------------

Hitherto I have n't observed
the jingling sounds of flowing waters
happening , very nearer to my residence
though decades passed by in passage of time

Have I not taken care of my environment
more than my comforts till now?
What is the impression  now that catch
the eyes of all eager onlookers?

Till now my superficial status
made me blind and dumb
after all the days hard work
gone completed to by this time,
and also to the  utmost satisfaction of higher ups
I am now slowly coming on to rest on the ground
to feel and experience the realities with needed vision

A sea of compassion is set now in my soul
A river of energy is flowing closely to my heart
A lake has undertaken the task of refurbishing me mentally
all things to put me to stand alert even during the ensuing fall time

Who am I in these changed scenario?
can't you presume or imaginine for your self
I am a wave weaving for the final part of my life
with all ups and downs  likely to disturb me
from the streaming delight and joy ultimately

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the river of life...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    I agree with the report of the life given through the wonderful and sentimental journey of the immages here..well done...