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Inside

My sadness, lust and loneliness
Sit with me as I rest
Some times I do not like them
But Some times My lust is best

She makes me feel alive and free!
When Loneliness comes and goes
But sadness she can upset me
She fills me full of woes

The three of us we live as one
The lead we take in turn
Sadness lust and loneliness
Waiting for happiness to return

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  • MessedupMarionette
    October 10, 2008

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    Short and to the point. I like the line "But some times my lust is best" (although I think "some times" was meant to be "sometimes"). I think you could've elaborated on that a little more. Thanks for entering.