the man threatens
with a raised finger -
smiling child
Author notes
Zvrhlík
Amaranthine Lover
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2. Right and Wrong
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http://www.ahapoetry.com/aadoh/sumoods.htm (it is saijiki)
anger belongs to summer
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Secretary of Haiku
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Comments
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Powerful. I think it conveys a striking image with only the first two lines.
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Thank you for entering my "Celebrating poetry and poets" competition. But I think you must have misunderstood the rules. For I do not see any reference in your entry to poets and/or poety. I wish you sucess with it elsewhere - but on this occasion, I simply have to say "no".
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strong in sense
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In a haiku its very difficult to convey a point to someone.
You convey your idea flawlessly to us
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This is a haiku isn't it. Haiku aren't one of my favorite type of poems. But this one isn't bad at all. Thanks for sharing it. thanks for adding it to my contest.
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Thank you for entering this haiku into the contest
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Beautiful Haiku
A very creative take on 'right and wrong'.
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A very well written Haiku
Paints a well known picture I am sure we have all seen.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Very well done. I can see the picture very clearly...and I smiled. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Please put prompt choice in AN's
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I love this.
You got so much in with so few words.
Well done x
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very realistic, made me smile..
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