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II Lon it is to see
and II Lon it is to see
but to Lon it is to see in saidy
and II Lon it is to see

If i was II lon in sin
two lady's i would sin
but if it is you two lady's
i wanted in to in

Can you call you tonight
or can you call you to you
do you want a II Lon on
or dan't you want a two

Tolled you a vision of what i can do
now what can you do for you
for if you were a lady
what would i do with you

Could you be the lady i've been for
or would it be the lady i wit for
can i come over tonight
or am i a lonely light

Could you say i am a lady
or could you say i'm a lay
i ain't either of the lady's
and that's all you wanted to T

And that's all you wanted to teel
but there's one more letting ting do
tan you see me in the bed room
or are you just with you and you.

Author notes

Chellyin choo chyin chyan whyoming man.

A contest entry

Tell me if you can go out with you tonight or tell me witch way do you do, i ain't your loving father and i ain't your lonely do.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Hmm.. interesting write
    although I was confused
    most of the time..
    I don't understand what you
    were trying to convey with this
    or which option you chose.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck