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Invisible

I am only a wave in the ocean.

Can you pick out specific waves?

Can you see me?

No.

I can't see me either.

I am one wave out of many.

Oh so many waves.

Can you see me?

I can't see me either.

I am only a wave in the ocean.

A contest entry

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  • VampyreAnna
    September 28, 2008

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    I know how you feel. I know too how it feels to be as significantly small as possible, but sometimes you just have to have some faith in your own importance before others will find you important!
    Stay confident,
    Love,
    Bri


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    Though very short in size yet it contains the message to represent the prompt with an efective tone..well done...