Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

I Am

I am the river
Travelling across the land
Spilling where I may

A sword in my bed
Leaves are split without a cut
Success, no thinking

I am the sword blade
Standing firm with great sharpness
Yielding to the bend

Water around blade
Bleeding without any wound
Cut yet without cut

I am many leaves
Passing without any sound
With the least effort

I am the great tree
Splitting the sky with no thought
Cracking many rocks

I am the wide sky
Blue within blue toward black
And yet I am light

I am the sun's light
I am the evening's moon
I am the stars above

I am...
I am...
I am...

...

2008 September 23

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    The canvas of the immageries in this poem is very strong..and the impact as well briangs the beauty into it..well done..