Going with the flow of unanswered dreams
This is my complicated life it seems
I am a flowing wave in the river of life
Unaware each day of where I will begin
Totally oblivious of where I might end
I have ambitions I have a healthy drive
I do all the things one do to stay alive
I believe in fate and the all knowing God
Yet feeling disconnected from every day reality
Unsure of what the future will hold for me
I don’t understand but I confess to this confusion
Try as I might I have yet to come to a conclusion
Taking each day as it comes one step at a time
I acknowledge that I am who I am not yet who I will be
While I’m still trying painfully to find the real me
Author notes
PROMPT:
I am a flowing wave in the river of life..Unknown.
A contest entry
- the river of life... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah..it is not you only..we all are doing the same thing finding ourselves painfully yet..thanks for the entry...
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Excellent
So true this write is and I feel you are very observant to all about you and with the knowledge of what things you can lend a hand and those you cant . Eyes of our forefathers often see through ours and in the teachings of days past helps us with our footprints we so leave behind .
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for thelovely comment. God Bless,
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