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Tongues In Cheeks For Cowards And The Weak.

If your conscience lied,
would the trigger beneath your tongue
allow such carelessly crafted words?

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  • raw love
    September 23, 2008

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    First off, I love the title! I would love a bit of an explanation. But the words fit together nicely in my mouth and I like that.
    Thanks for entering! (goodluck)
    <3 deep one


    • Blueisacolour
      September 25, 2008
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      Thank youuu!

      Explanation for the title or the lines?


      • raw love
        September 25, 2008
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        anything you feel like explaining mainly the poem.


        • Blueisacolour
          September 27, 2008
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          I hope that made sense.
          *bites lip*

        • Blueisacolour
          September 27, 2008
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          Basically it means if everything you thought was right was wrong and vice versa, you'd be at a loss for words and advice [If your conscience lied,]

          and you'd have very little to say about anything. If you did say anything, would you be simply shooting yourself down and making a fool of yourself by saying these meaningless things, due to the loss of your conscience?

          [would the trigger beneath your tongue
          allow such carelessly crafted words?]


  • innocence jaded.xx
    September 23, 2008

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    Oooh, this is brilliant ! I loved it. It's a very VERY catching question, and I love how you phrased & wrote everything. Good luck in the contest ♥

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