In darkness, ropes bite into your wrists,
your knees ache against the stone floor.
The sweat of anticipation flows from your skin.
How much longer must you endure?
Rebellion and lust have cost you dear,
a prisoner to My worst intimacy tonight.
You are nothing as I sate My greed,
your ears hear My cry in ecstasy’s flight.
My touch, given to another in love,
as anger and envy rape your heart.
Soft whispers once were yours to enjoy
and I am tearing your world apart
One moment of delirium jacking on My bed,
caught by eyes that can seethe pain.
Caution a whisper on the wind
now I will drive your life insane.
Silence, then the soft swish of leather,
your skin tenses, eager to feel the pain.
My pleasure is no longer yours,
instead agony as cries meet your brain.
You can see: My mouth swallowing deep,
My breasts heaving with desire,
My hands grasping; stroking; denying;
as I set My lover’s dreams on fire.
My voice coaxing : ’Cum for Me’
for My pleasure, he releases his seed,
as you kneel, aching in My sight,
will I take pity, and let you be freed?
I am by you now, inhale, smell the scent
My body fragrant with his pleasure inside
My hands grasp at your meat,
as My new lover stands at My side
‘For the pleasure you give Me, My love,
a toy for our mutual fulfilment, of course.
Sate My desire; fulfil my darkest need,
enjoy him; take him; he’s yours’
My heels click away across the stone floor
you're left to your fate, as is My will.
The pain of humiliation remains
I watch as My lover takes his fill
My juices on stiffening flesh; the lubrication
My laughter in sadistic mirth; the light.
Tears flow as the rigid tool probes your ass,
the reality of your betrayal now firmly in sight.
Your mistake: the phrase no limits
in Domination's game of the mystic.
Wiser to declare the boundaries of love,
than succumb to My ways most sadistic.
Remember there is no limit that can bind,
the pleasure I derive from your pain.
My desires are such that all is Mine
as you scream aloud My name!
Author notes
by one ESMF
Sadistic POV
Grins innocently.
A contest entry
- For Erotic Challenge members only by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended October 10, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, and of course I know this can only be one person. I am speechless. You are such a sadist - your poor little submissive.
Spelling/ grammar/ punctuation: 19 (there are some lines that feel a little forced like "I am by you")
Creativity/ Presentation:20
How well you handled the challenge: 20
Grab me effect: 19
Overall: 20
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Yes ok guilty I am a sadist but if someone says no limits they cannot complain can they?
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Such devotion.....
words soothing like a fine lotion.
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Very interesting indeed, sadistic to say the very least. A job well done. You have a very evil mind..lol
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Didn't earn the nickname ESMF for nothing ya know. Grins
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stupid computer! stealing my bunnies from my friend and sister.... geesh!
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thanks for the heads up Sis the pic is awesome too... will have to play with it for you
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honey... I leave for you a mystery... there are two errors that I have found. One is a mispelling, the other is a grammatical error. Look closely and you will find them.... only then will you get my bunnies.
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:curtseys: think i found them Ma'am ... runs
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yes Ma'am Sis xxx
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Excellent job! Now you will be rewarded! Three bunnies will be your reward
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wow, um... wow.... um....
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Thank you
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Great Job Jems m'lady *evil*
There is no limit to Your talents
i love You !!
xxx Your angel xxx
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smiles thank you My sweetest angel
YLD
xxx Jem xxx
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