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It's " AUTUMN "

Goodbye summertime
hello fall
winter is coming
      ....

A chilly breeze
snow in the air
autumn is here
      ....

Autumn is here
autumn is gone
winter is here

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Inspired by the weather at my home

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  • The Fun House silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is really cute. The seasons do change quite rapidly it seems. I really enjoyed reading this one.

  • carole21
    October 13, 2008

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    cute and well done . . liked "hello fall winter is coming" and "winter is here" . . windblown like the season . .


  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    your third one will seem to carry the most truth in a few more weeks thak you for entering


  • Erica Weeks
    September 25, 2008

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    what a beautiful reminder of the seasons changing...this is such a beautiful and inspiring time of year...great write

  • goalsv
    September 23, 2008
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    Great write, I can almost feel the weather. Love this time of year.


  • rose-red
    September 23, 2008

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    I loved the way you personafied the seasons. I can just picture the leaves all falling and a cold chill sweaping over the city. beautiful work, and good luck in the contest!
    ~RoseRed~


  • Darc Soul 69
    September 23, 2008
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    this is beautiful just like the winter weather of home, you have done a great job with this piece and i thank you for sending me the link to it I am going to go check out more of your poems. Thanks for sharing this with everyone on AP as well and good luck to you in the contest

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