Stars were placed in your reach,
if you felt the glow,
the shine of the sunrise;
how time flies.
Are your fingertips numb from my touch,
could you want it this much?
A muffled dream, a silent look,
in my eyes you're beautiful.
Sand,
gently slipping through my fingers.
I'm losing my religion,
I am a vessel.
Fill me with your emotions,
tell me what your life has been without me.
I want to know where I fit;
squares in round holes.
A contest entry
- Pre-write challenge! by Lady Michaella.
485 points, ended February 20, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oo.. a very nice and abstract piece. very well written.. and really gets me thinking. through my eyes trying to stay open from tireness.. id say this is pretty dam amazing.
thanks for entering my contest!
and best of luck!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
xx
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