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An Irish Friendshp Wish

May there always be work for your hands to do,
May your purse always hold a coin or two.

May the sun always shine on your windowpane,
May a rainbow be certain to follow each rain.

May the hand of a friend always be near you,
May God fill your heart with gladness to cheer you.

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    July 28
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    I love the sentiment here! A lovely Irish Friendship wish. I enjoyed the flow of it and the rhyme Nicely done!
    K


    • midnight eyes
      July 29
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      Thnaks for reading feel free to read more.

      Some of my older poems I been trying to give them and up date new face lift lol if you come across any of mine that is a lot older and need a little bost let me know.


      *Amber


  • ShadowCloud
    July 26
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    Thank yo

  • IanArcherW
    September 23, 2008
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    It wrapped up nicely, but I found line 4 to be bitteen awkward.


  • kitkat08
    September 23, 2008
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    awwweee sis that was great i really loved it very sweet
    love ya kathy

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