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Embers

Fingers trailing
leaving exotic reminders
of a seduction
long wanted
of me touching bare flesh
and kissing the valley of your back
and gripping those half moons
as you dip there for more
... for more.

Fancy takes me at night and I wish,
I wish for that one chance to
make you my maze,
searching wonderously for that
spot to take you
... there.

Let me have you,
for my mind will not rest,
till I do.

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  • SoulPrincess
    September 23, 2008
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    O wow! I did not expect the responses I have gotten. I just let the emotions flow and put finger to keys... Thanks for the comments!!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    This is a very sensual and arousing read. You've done very well here. Not too revealing, which leaves just enough for the readers to leave it to their own imaginations! Excellent!


  • GizmoFox
    September 23, 2008
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    I agree with EternalComplication; Yes... it's very sexy! Well done.


  • Curious LiLi
    September 23, 2008
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    Oh, I love it.
    Very sexy, indeed!
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