Eyes intense
Smelling rat's scent
heart pounding inside,
sprinter breathing heavy
pounce upon red tape.
A contest entry
- priceless by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 14 entries
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Good write!
All the best!

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Very clever indeed!.. x



