I sit in my born perfection ... Two halves on either side of me ... Darkness in one dircetion... Angelic , I can be ... When bound together at my discretion ... they form the whole me ...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by MessedupMarionette.
700 points, ended October 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm sorry as I'm on a phone. navigating , and formats are diffcult. Thank you,
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Everyone has two sides. The soft, beautiful side that they reveal so everyone thinks they're quite alright and then there's the dark, glorifying side that we hide and keep for ourselves. Very well done.
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Short, sweet and to the point. Interesting that you separate the lines with ... rather than starting on a new level. Thanks for entering!
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ok i was wondering about the formats but now i understand. Besides that i am awed at the short but tightly packed piece of work here. well done and good luck
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