Here we stand
at the end of the road.
No where to turn
no where to go.
It's the end
after all.
It took us a while
to get here
you and I.
We have been through
thick
and thin.
Trials
and tribulations
as my mom would say.
Now though
its time
choices need to be made
decisions
accepted.
Life to be lived.
Too bad we can't be together
too bad its
the
end
of
the
road.
Author notes
I actually used your picture on the contest as my prompt so I credit whoever did it. Somegirlyou know took this picture so she is credited.
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A contest entry
- Do You Have An Interesting Mind? by SomeGirlYouKnew.
1850 points, ended October 4, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A genuinely different take on the picture prompt, well worked and thought through. I think that technically your "no where" should be "nowhere" but you may well have planned it this way. Nicely executed.
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Nice job with the prompt
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Sad but true to life
Love is not forever in some cases. Enjoy it when it's there and have fond memories, but know when to get out. When you try to hold on to something that is not there anymore, is when feelings get hurt and good memories fade. This is a sad but true look at life in the real world, The Shaker
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Goes really well with the picture and fits the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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XD i like that you used my picture... im the one who took it, just in case you were wondering.
you have a few small typos, such as in the last stanza it should be "too" rather than "to" both times. also, nowhere should be one word in the first stanza.
good luck in my contest.
p.s. hint, hint: fix your errors -
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thanks for the suggestions. Errors are fixed. And okay thanks for telling me who took the picture. So I'll credit you.
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