Her beauty lies—in more ways than one—just outside her glance
It whispers softly of mediocrity via her ear, straight to her heart
Trying so hard to protect her from the corruption of its curse
Muting what should be so loud to her own eyes
It hides from her
Her full, flowing hair… it’s filled with it
It spreads itself entirely, coating her smooth, flawless skin
It reflects deeply from within her penetrating brown eyes
Only to hint softly along the curves of her delicately colored lips
Boastfully, it explodes from within… where all is safe
She touches hearts without making contact
Spreads smiles like they were contagious
All from beneath her skin, which is no different in beauty form her exterior.
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to me the title doesn't seem to reflect the piece though i could be wrong. anyway as far as the poem is concerned i have to compliment its power to evoke some great imagery in fact im a little turned on now that i read this
i caught a few grammatical errors in it as well. you might want to proof read this baby. take care
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a very fine write
thank you for sharing
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This is really good.A loving caring poem for who ever it was intended for.You took alot of time getting the words just right and you did just that.Great job.
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awww this is sweet!
i don't know why but i found this a little sweet.
you wrote this so beautifully you have so much talent.
i really enjoyed reading this, thank you so much for sharing,
your Faerie
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This poem is lovely, in diction, form, and sentiment. A pleasure to read. Peace be with you, Dannie
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Thanks you, you as well.
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