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What Remains

All they’ve known has burned away
So many dreams destroyed
Hope, love, happiness – forgotten
Elusive fantasies, now meaningless
Surrounded by the ruins of countless

They toil on, combating devils in disguise
Our ever unacknowledged heroes

And one by one each man falls
Silently ripped from this world.
Hell claims another victory as
Ever onward the demons come
Such desolation left in their wake.

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  • Goddess of illusion
    March 6

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    Loved it...


    I enjoyed this write of yours, I got lost in it... LOL, I read it about 3 times and I was just mesmerized. The wording is perfect and it all flows into one...

    Keep your pen flowing with ink that never fade...

    illusion


  • honorable mention
    September 23, 2008
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    yay!!! you're back and better then ever