We write with pen on paper trails
Erotic purls that senses swirl
Intimate touches, sexy tales
Adventures in love we unfurl
To meet the needs of those who read
Researching our reader's desire
Understanding what brings out lust
Words combine bringing heat and fire
Language floats, images they trust
To meet the needs of those who read
A word has power if used right
One style is no better or worse
There is no reason we should fight
The act of love is not a curse
To meet the needs of those who read
Author notes
Erotica Challenge Erotic Challenge - Part 2 - Section 1 (Sensual)
You can find Erotic Challenge - Part 2 - Section 2 (Hardcore) at http://allpoetry.com/poem/4657307
You can also find Erotic Challenge - Part 2 - Section 1 (Combined) at http://allpoetry.com/poem/4657317
Comments
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I think that it really works and agree that the hardcore makes more sense as the first half of the line with the sensual as the echo.
Personally I prefer style 2 -
Wow I think we have something here, fantastic job
I have a really crazy idea and not sure how to work it yet (will discuss with my classics tutor today)... here we go
One is the first sound the other the echo ... hardcore with a sensual echo which , to me, is erotica summed up.
Maybe cojoin at the refrain so its not over used... I'll be back
Jem
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